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小编:环球教育 110说起雅思口语考题,是不是觉得特别的贴近生活呢?比如问个旅游,介绍个朋友。但是!很多考生为什么还是攻破不了雅思口语高分呢?最深的套路就在这些日常里啊!生僻词究竟应该怎么说,时态混乱怎么破,这些你都知道吗?尤其一考到旅游类的题目,烤鸭们在后台简直是一片哀嚎……下面就让环球颜王团名师杨鑫老师给我们介绍一些关于trip这个话题,其实可以选择的角度是非常多的,比如可以说不喜欢但常有的旅行就是出差,也可以说不喜欢某个地方的trip是因为地方本身环境不好,然而常常take这种trips是因为需要陪祖母定期去那里复查身体。此外,“中国式学校参观旅行”也是很好的素材之一。下面举一个杨鑫老师的口语范文例子来分析:
Undeniably, traveling can always loosen people up, but sometimes it can also make people gloomy. When I finished my high entrance exam, my parents took me to Beijing in that summer, and the fact is that I often take this trip now as I become a part-time tour guide in my holiday.
用一个Undeniably做为开头,首先对【旅行这件事儿】做了一个系统阐述——旅行确实可以让人开心,但是有时候也能让人很SAD……然后就按时间点开始说在XX时候的时候,这样的总分说法,比你们一上来就【when I was XXX】是不是要高级不少呢?
毕竟有了一个像模像样的陈述句,考官可是会觉得你是有过缜密思考的哦!
As a matter of fact, that trip is the one that I can never forget in my whole life because every time when I think about it, I feel disgusted. Beijing is one of the most famous tourist cities in China. However, there is a kind of special traveling group in Beijing. We call that trip exploring universities. Middle school students from all over China will be pushed by their parents to visit some top universities in Beijing. And what they can visit in Beijing is only universities. You can imagine how boring the trip is. Unluckily, I used to be one of them.
清一色的都是【啊!这是一次愉快的旅行】之后,当考官突然听见一个关于吐槽的故事,好奇心当然会被调动起来啦~而unluckily, I used to be one of them这样地道又俏皮的说话方式,也很容易引起考官的好感呢~同时注意本段中 be pushed by 这种用法,也是非常地道,也充分反映出了自己的不满。其实,雅思口语考试并不一定一味地需要高级词汇,有几个亮眼词汇,就已经足够~
Well, my parents and I spent a whole day in Beijing, and visited 8 universities there. We saw 8 campuses in so-called distinct styles. For me, in fact they were all the same. And we even visited some classroom buildings, dorms, canteens, gyms and so on. From my point of view, what I should have visited is some tourist attractions like the Great wall and Summer Palace, but the truth was that this short trip really made me down. I could see the same disappointment from all other young guys. On the contrary, our parents were all excited about what they saw, and they kept imagining that one day their kids can study there.
大家有么有注意到,范文中总-分结构的运用?这一段可以看做是上一段的分述。先说有这样的一个旅行团,再说在这个旅行团中,我们看了什么。
本段中的亮眼句当然是【I could see the same disappointment from all other young guys.】然后再说家长们都很兴奋地在幻想孩子们以后在名牌大学入读的情况。这种反差,即使在考官看来,也是十分有趣的一种经历,毕竟,歪果仁的好奇心可一点不比我们少!on the contrary,又一个地道用法,即使用在作文中也会加分。
Provided who has visited a certain university can get more possibility to receive an offer from this university, there is no doubt that I can visit it every day. Howbeit, the fact is this kind of trip is totally meaningless.
在经过了几段简单的叙述之后,结尾段终于放大招啦!配合从句进行了对此次旅游的总结,并陈述出【如果说参观大学就能获得录取通知书,那我可以每天都去看啊~】这样的观点,同时用the fact is this kind of trip is totally meaningless这样的句子来呼应一开始【disgusted】。简直想不给高分都困难呢~
当然啦,环球小编也中肯地评价一句,结尾这样复杂的从句不是每一位烤鸭都可以轻松说出来的,但是这篇范文的思想以及行文结构则是我们很容易模仿的。需要把握住总分结构先对考官提问进行一次系统的阐述,然后再通过细节以及举例来丰富自己的观点。
我猜啊,你们又要说自己例子不够了。下面环球小编就用这个旅行的例子再教给大家一个绝招。随便一个话题是如何延展到不同的话题里面,让它成为一个“万能语料”“魔力药水”
Sample 1 人物类话题的扩充:
One of your best friends 最好朋友之一
A person who just moved to live with you 搬来与你同住的人
A creative person 有创造力的人
这些都是人物类常考的话题,那么怎么才能将上面这段经历运用到人物类话题呢?
One of your best friends 最好的朋友之一:我在上述这个trip碰见了和我有一样苦恼的人,后来我们成为了好朋友……
A creative person 有创造力的人: 同学们可以说我在参加这样的trip之后,我以为很无聊,可是导游却让这样无聊的旅行变得很有意义,比如他创造了什么活动,或者什么游戏。很有趣,我发现他是一个有创造力的人…...
Sample 2 地点类话题扩充:
A place you like most in the city you are living in / A public place in your city you like to visit公共之地
大学是公共之地,这样主要说的就是这个地点,把trip改成特定的某个大学,可以把糟糕的心情换一下,转换成有意义的大学参观trip,参观教师、校园等,学术氛围激励着我要努力学习,考进这所大学……
Sample 3 事件经历类与其他:
A special short trip you want to take in the future 未来短而特别的旅行
An unforgettable vacation you had/A short holiday 难忘的假期
Something you forgot to do 忘记
A time you felt a little bit angry 生气
这些话题也都可以用杨鑫老师讲的那个例子。这么简单的转换,大家不要光听老师说哦,可以自行扩展一下。冲刺雅思口语高分。同时感谢杨鑫老师的分享。