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写作范例分享:理科生越来越少的社会现象分析

2015-11-09

来源:环球教育整理

小编:环球教育整理 146
摘要:说到雅思写作往往是中国雅思考生的老大难问题。今天环球教育(原环球教育)带来了一篇雅思写作范例。

教育类的话题是雅思写作的常考话题,其中涉及到的语法和词汇比较广泛,下面环球教育(原环球教育)为大家分享一篇雅思考试写作真题详解,希望对大家备考写作有帮助。

  Not enough students choose science subjects in university in manycountries. What’re the reasons for this problem? What’re the effects on thesociety?

  写作思路:

  有关科目设置的题基本上都是有关中小学的,如science 对比arts, 而关于大学的题目主要是讨论理论课和专业课的侧重问题,从这一点来说,这是一道新题。回答这道题首先要明确一点:不选择science的学生都转向哪里了?近年大学比较流行的专业有business, accounting, economics, nursing, computer science,communication, education. 第二点,science到底指什么?它指的是physics, chemistry, biology

  第一段:science 不像以前那么流行,很多学生转向business, accounting,economics

  第二段:原因有:1 难学 2 毕业后的工资不如商科高 3实用性不高

  第三段:负面影响:1 科学与物质生活的紧密联系 2 science是很多实用学科的基础

  第四段:总结

  范文:

  In some rapidly developing countries, increasing university studentsmajor in business, accounting, communication or computer programing rather thanscience. I personally believe that this is an inevitable transition in the eraof information and globalization when capital flows worldwide and communicationtechnology play a role in almost every field(状语从句). Thechanges in technology and social evolvement are being reflected in the universitysubject preference.(进行时被动语态)

  The first reason that science loses its popularity to otherdisciplines relates to the employment rate and starting salaries upongraduation.(同位语从句) Science undergraduates risk higherunemployment and earn less than computer programmers or businessmen and the gapmay be wider in Master degree.(并列句)During the economicrecession, some students with interest in science maygive in to the pressure inreality. Another contributor is the difficulty of science subjects that preventmany potential students from enrolling in this faculty.(定语从句) Picturing oneself as a scientist is not easy for a high schoolleaver. On top of the difficulty of this discipline itself, the application inpractice and transforming into profit is harder.

  However, science is so crucial to our human society that no countrycan afford the consequences of ignoring it.(结果状语从句)Scienceis the basis of many practical disciplines such as environment science, medicalscience, space science, engineering, genetic science and so forth. Without thesupport of general science, many other fields would find it very challenging toget further developed. What’s worse, science is directly related to ourmaterial life. We live on scientific research findings and products, rangingfrom energy supply, aircraft to numerous consumer goods. (非谓语) It is hard to imagine living a life without these scientificadvancements.(形式主语)

  To sum up this report, science is less popular than before becausethe society demands more professionals in other fields such as business andcommunication.(比较句型+原因状语从句)However I’m convinced that the potential implications are negative to thehealth of society, hence requiring relevant solutions to reverse the trend. (宾语从句+非谓语)

  以上就是小编今天带来的雅思写作范文了,或许你在雅思写作真题里已经看到过它,那就再复习一遍吧。小编认为,只要多加练习,大家的雅思写作水平一定会大大提高的!


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