中国考生在写作过程中最大的瓶颈不是单词量匮乏，也不是语法出错，那么问题究竟出在哪里？部分烤鸭给出的论证有理有据、铿锵有力、颇有说辞，可惜文采不佳，就好比一盘粉丝炒肉，没有了"蚂蚁上树"这般美名，何以吊足食者的胃口与好奇心！

　　句式千篇一律，句型整齐划一，看着顺，却无勾人摄魄之意，简而言之"Chinglish"。常用句型：主谓宾，偶尔会出现定语从句，再无其它，更有甚者，抄袭模板。

　　一言不合就送福利，以下句型烤鸭们可作参考：

　　句型一：形式主语从句

　　a. It is + adj./动词过去分词 + that + 从句......

　　e.g. It is supposed that left-over seniors and children should attract attention from all walks of life.

　　句型二：方式副词引导主句

　　b. Adv, S + V + O

　　e.g. Essentially, local authorities, schools and parents cooperate to address juvenile delinquency.

　　句型三：插入语与非限制性定语从句的完美结合

　　c. 主语 + 谓语 + 宾语，插入语，which + 谓语 + 宾语

　　e.g. Greenhouse gas emission proves to be much more serious, undeniably, which turns out to be an unneglectable factor to the environmental contamination.

　　句型四：虚拟语气的倒装用法

　　d. Had + 主语 + 动词过去分词 + 宾语 + 其它，主语 +

　　could/should/might/would + have + 动词过去分词 + 宾语 + 其它

　　e.g. Had schools set up law-related courses, teenagers would have gotten access to the effects of committing crimes and avoided it.

　　句型五：非谓语动词作状语

　　e. V-ing + 宾语 + 其它，主语 + 谓语 + 宾语 + 其它

　　e.g. Being in an information-explosion era, men   get touch with the outside world without stepping out of their homes, instead, they all hold a cellphone in hand surfing on the Internet.

　　f. Done + 宾语 + 其它，主语 + 谓语 + 宾语 + 其它

　　e.g. Constrained by examination-oriented education, part of students failed to exert their talent, consequently, their exists such a pity in some countries.

　　句型六：独立主格作状语

　　g.主语A + v-ing + 其它，主语B + 谓语 + 宾语+ 其它

 e.g. Funds permitting, the governments should attribute certain investment to art construction, which plays an increasingly important role in modern civilization.

　　希望对考生有所帮助，同时也感谢西安环球教育名师许代娣老师的分享！