让考官狠扣分的雅思写作常见开头

2017-09-08编辑: Eileen来自: 环球教育

  雅思写作是一项比较难以提高的的项目,主要是由于词汇语法和逻辑思维都有所差异,那么有哪些写作方式是比较常见的错误呢?下面小编就为大家介绍一下。

  1.中式英文

  Topic 1-The happiest moment in yourlife

  In our life, there are always somemoments which make your heart floweropened angrily……

  Topic 2- The population problem

  The population problem is a very bigproblem. For example, in the citycenters of Shanghai, we can alwayssee people mountain people sea there.

  Topic3- Is there fairness in today’sbusiness world?

  I think in today’s society, there isno fairness in the business world. Forexample, I always choppedwhen I go out buy things……

  Topic 4- The advantage of being a niceperson

  Being a nice person have manyadvantage. I believe if a people always dobad things, he will get“baoying”.

  2.观点模糊态度暧昧

  Topic-Should college students beallowed to get married?

  I think this topic is very hard tosay. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, sothis topic is very difficult for me……

  3.偏离主题

  Topic-It is said that nowadays one cannot acquire thequalifications and quality essential to successthrough university education. Towhat extent do you agree ordisagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

  I think to success, we must have a lotof important qualities. To havethese important qualities, we mustlearn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc.We can learn these qualities from our teachers, ourfriends and frombooks. All in all, we can learn from many places.

  4.语法错误惨不忍睹

  Topic-If children behave badly, shouldtheir parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

  About this problem, my think is ifchildren behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teachchild is parent’s responsibility. So we also punishparents toobesides children is also should.

  5.过分简单没有重点

  Topic-The importance of environmentalprotection

  This issue is surely very important,let’s talk about it!

  6.用词不当,表达不准

  Topic-Should college students beallowed to get married?

  I think college students should not beallowed to get married because theyare very young and so we can’ttake the responsibility to form a family.

  7.意思重复原地踏步

  Topic-Your opinion on DINKfamilies

  My opinion on DINK families is thatDINK families is not a good thing. Andit is a bad thing. It bringsno benefits to our society and it is even sometimesharmful to oursociety.

  8.中国俗语胡乱翻译

  Topic 1-Is it good to have a largefamily?

  I think it is good to have a largefamily. Because we Chinese believe asentence: “Many sons, manylucks”……

  正确说法:Happiness lies in having manychildren

  Topic 2 -Should we pretend to knoweverything or admit our ignorance?

  We all know, our Chinese old fathersand grandfathers said: “Know is know,don’t know is don’tknow”……

  Topic 3- Do you think one’s characteris greatly influenced by his/herfamily?

  Chinese old words says very good:Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix,rat’s son can makehole……

  Topic 4- The advantage of being a niceperson

  I believe one sentence:“A good personis all life safe”. We Chinese peoplealways say: “Good has good pay,bad has bad pay”.

  9.观点武断,态度强硬

  Topic1-The importance ofconfidence

  In my opinion, confidence is the mostimportant thing for a person. All thesuccessful people in the worldare full of confidence. While those people whodon’t haveconfidence, they all have failed.

  Topic 2 - The solution to the trafficproblem

  I think to solve the traffic problem,very easy! For those who don’t obeythe traffic rules, we should putall of them into prison. If we do that, I’msure there will be notraffic problem any more.

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