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托福写作结尾有章可循

2015-11-05

来源:环球教育整理

小编:环球教育整理 101
摘要:托福写作的结尾如果写好了,一篇优秀的文章也随之诞生。如果作文虎头蛇尾,也会影响分数,下面环球教育(原环球教育)向大家介绍托福写作结尾的必要元素。

开头和结尾都是阅卷的目光重点,写作的结尾是有章可循的。这里来和环球教育(原环球教育)看看托福考试写作结尾段的必要结构,帮助大家写出完美结尾。

  1. 再次陈述主题。用 paraphrase 方式再次呈现主题陈述中出现的三要素: a.问题中存在争议的地方; b.观点;c.理由。

  2. 结束句。放在陈述完主题之后。

  托福写作辅导提出结尾段结束句的三种常见写法:

  一. 托福作文的最后总结教训或提出建议

  In conclusion, whether toimitate or vary from others to achieve success, it hinges mostly on theoccupations we engage in. For jobs like doctors that require routine practices,it is unnecessary for them to make alterations to become successful. Whereasartists like painters whose works are characteristic of creativity andimagination, it is of crucial importance to distinguish from others to succeed.

  二. 提出令人忧虑的结果或可能出现的负面结果

  假设读者没有想作者说的那样去做,在结论中提出将会出现的负面结果,帮助读者预见到令人忧虑的后果,进而令读者自然第接受作者的意见。

  e.g., To summarize, on onehand, for artists who are fortunate to profit immensely from their occupation,it is unnecessary for the government to offer additional financial incentivesfor them. On the other hand, government should provide financial support andappropriate policies to impoverished artists who engage in conventionalcraftsmanship because these are viewed as national treasure and cultural heritageof the country. If the government did not support those unfortunate traditionalartists, the valuable conventional forms of arts would disappear very soon.

  三. 提出问题留待读者思考

  In conclusion, it isinevitable for children to commit mistakes at a young age, parents should playtheir part to instill the importance of good behaviors in their children.Parents should allow children to make small mistakes as a meaningful learningexperience. However, what would be like if parents permit their children tocommit serious mistakes like theft and robbery?

  结尾段常用表达方式:

  Finally, thus, in a word,in brief;

  In conclusion, to conclude,in the end;

  In the final analysis, in anutshell, on the whole;

  To summarize, toencapsulate, in sum, in summary

  In light of these facts,considering these ideas


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